Today’s Writing Tip Is on When to Use He versus His

Most of the time it’s a no-brainer as to when to use he or his. “He opened the car door to get his groceries.” Simple. But what about this –

“Mark and his wife were excited about their evening; the president of the college provided theater tickets for he and his family.”

Right or wrong? Wrong.

The president provided tickets for him and his family. Whenever you’re confused about using a pronoun because of a second pronoun, just omit the second clause – “the president provided tickets for he” sounds bad. If you’re still unsure, say it out loud. What throws people off balance in this example is the combination of referring to two different people.

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